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Saturday, February 25, 2006

விடுதலை...

என் அம்மா நான் எப்போ வருவேன்னு வேதனையோட இருந்தாங்க...
அப்பாவோ கதவுக்கு வெளிய நின்னுகிட்டு என்ன ஆச்சோன்னு மனவேதனையோட காத்துக்கிட்டு இருந்தாரு..
எனக்கு விடுதலை கெடச்சுது... நானும் வெளியே வந்தேன்..
என்னை பார்த்த என் அம்மா சந்தோசத்தல மயக்கம் போட்டுட்டா...
அவள பார்த்த நான் கதரி அழ ஆரம்பிச்சுடேன்...
என்னை பார்த்த என் அப்பாவோ உலகத்தில் உள்ள விலை மதிக்க முடியாத பொருள் கெடச்சா வர சந்தோசத்த விட அதிக சந்தோசமா என்ன பார்தாரு...
ஆம்.. அன்று தான் என் பிறந்தநாள்.. என் அம்மாவின் கருவறை சிறையில் இருந்து எனக்கு விடுதலை கிடைத்த நாள்...

viduthalai...

en ammavoo naan eppo varuveanu vedhaiyooda irundhaanga...
appavaoo kadhavuku veliya ninukitu yenna aachoonu manavedhanaiyooda kaathukitu irundhaaru..
yenaku viduthalai kedachudhu.. naanum veliyae vandhaen...
ennai partha en amma sandhosathula mayakam potutta...
avala partha naan kathari azha aarambichutaen....
ennai partha en appavaoo ulakathil ulla vilai mathika mudiyaadha porul kedacha vara sandhosatha vida adhiga sandhosamaa enna parthaaru..
aam.. anru thaan en priandhanaaL.. en ammavain karuvarai siraiyil irundhu enaku viduthalai kidaitha naal...

15 Comments:

Anonymous Anonymous said...

nalla visaaricheengala? amma santhoshathala thaana mayakam pottaaanga? ;)

March 01, 2006 12:58 AM  
Blogger shree said...

hi neighbour, first time here. the picture in your foto is very nice. :)

do u think this as 'vidudhalai'? i have the perception (and have come across several with same perception) that those period when i was in my mom's womb only, were the happiest periods ever. what say??

March 01, 2006 2:56 AM  
Blogger KC! said...

Anegama ippadi oru pillaya-nu mayangitruppanga ;) J/k, but a good one from reality perspective

March 01, 2006 7:55 AM  
Blogger kuttichuvaru said...

nice one...

March 01, 2006 8:10 AM  
Blogger Kirukal said...

Provokes me to think of the joy and anticipation my parents must have had when I was born...aana ippo avanga paavam...enda pethomnu aayirikum...ungallukum athe gathiya?
Nice one!!!

March 01, 2006 2:56 PM  
Blogger Kavitha Jay said...

kalakal a irruka..nice way of portraying it..
anna pavum unga amma..unna vechittu enna kashta padrangaloo...hehe..:))

March 01, 2006 7:15 PM  
Blogger ashok said...

well written....just recently played the fathers part....

March 02, 2006 7:25 AM  
Blogger Kavitha Jay said...

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March 02, 2006 8:09 AM  
Blogger logic said...

good one babu.
i think this is u r second one about birth.
roomba azhama yosikiringa birth
pathi..

From the conception to the child birth is a very imp phase in a couple life right..

March 02, 2006 9:34 AM  
Blogger neighbour said...

@ammu:- yes you are 200% correct.

@bindu:- avanagala ketu thaan therunchukanumaa enna.. unamai namakae theriyumaae.


@shree:- adhu pongalaku vandha picture. I love gramathu valzhai.. thanks for visiting.

I too agree with that... we can rephrase the term "indhach chiraiyil irundhu viduthalai"

March 02, 2006 9:51 AM  
Blogger neighbour said...

@usha:- irukaalam.. naan pirakum poodhae nurse kaiya pudichu eluthaanaanaam..

@KC:- thanks

@kirukal:- kulandhai perum pozudhu avanaga adaiyum sandhoosatha vera ethukum oppitda mudiyaadhu...

March 02, 2006 9:56 AM  
Blogger neighbour said...

@veda:- enna ippadi solliteenga.. avunga yerkanavae "unnai pethathuku rendu erumai vaangirukallamnu" sollraaanga..


@Mystery:- Hmm enna pannaradhu avaunga poona jenmathula senga paavom polae naan avangaluku pullaiyaa piruntaen...

@Ashok:- Congrats.. Hope you are the right person to comment this...

@Logic:-- yethumlaiyumae azzhalamaa thonda thonda thaanae pudhiyaal kedaikum...

March 02, 2006 10:01 AM  
Blogger Sriram said...

Hey..
Thanks for visiting my blog..
ur poem was nice.. but one question, are you sure ur the expression ur dad had was happiness?? ;)
Sriram

March 02, 2006 3:18 PM  
Blogger neighbour said...

@Sriram:- definitely yes.. adhu yellam anubhavichaa thaan theriyum..

March 02, 2006 5:53 PM  
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February 06, 2007 3:47 PM  

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